Friday, October 29, 2010

I, of the Storm

Dark, the thunderous skies
erupt into light and sound
the heavens open up
and the rain begins
to pour down

Lightning strikes the tallest tree
bolts of fire fall into the sea
Immersed in the darkness
of the clouds
the sound of danger
all around

Thunderous skies
fierce, blinding light
trees falling down
from the winds
all around

- Charles Longstreet


  1. A vivid and strong write. Nicely done.